My oh so poetic poetry

here is another poem

Bleeding from the outside in
from the end we now begin
die so slow then come alive fast
run towards a forgotten past
no distinction of dark or light
no recolection of day or night
see your face it's all a blur
who you are and who you were
meet the voices in your head
no need to fear they are already dead
they will haunt you 'till the day you die
you need o run to stay alive
is life really worth the struggle?
likie clean water from a dirty puddle
jump through hoops to make it work
always end up in the dirt
drink the water there is no way out
no need to scream no need to shout
have a feeling something's wrong
can't figure out what's going on
one whole day of constant rain
one whole week goes down the drain
fall down hard get right back up
no escape no way to stop
there is no escape there is no release
'till death takes life into it's freeze

check out the other poems i've previously posted and comment on them please I'd really like to know what people think of them thanks

toodles and till next time

Out of all of my poems this one is probably my favorite

Alice

If alice went through the looking glass
if only it were real
if confusion truly reigned
how do you think we would deal?
Screaming laughing all around
can't understand that up is down
don't tell me that my time is up
don't admit we're all fucked up
Spin around and turn around
and fall down really hard
cry until the sun comes up
then say it's just a farce
A game we play so that no one will say
that they don't care
there's nothing there
and now it's all over
Go back through the looking glass
to where the world is safe
stand on the ground and look around
 at a world you dearly hate
Alice come back
to where the world is safe
and follow all the rules
the white rabbit is already late
leave behind all those fools.

So there it is I really appreciate comments on all of my posts especially the poems  so please let me know what you think..:))

toodles

sugar beet get over yourself there are so many things sweeter.
honey bunch how many bees have stung you?
sweetie pie I'd much rather have cake.
chocolate, you are so rich I feel poor beside you.
sunshine I'm much too sad for it to be sunny.
raindrop you are so cold and wet how do you feel?
gummy bear your much too soft.
toffee please let go of me.
rock candy I can't have you because you hurt me.

love is sweet but never perfect...

leave comments on my poems please.

toodles

I'm going crazy ...correction i'm there
I am so ticked off and for no real reason
inexistant reason#1  I WANNA GET OUT OF THIS HOUSE
inexistant reason#2  I'M STUCK IN THIS HOUSE
inexistant reason#3  I'M JUST NATURALLY NUTSO
inexistant reason#4  GET ME OUT GET ME OUT

I think you get the big idea seclusion sucks!!!

DON'T TELL ME TO SMILE WHEN I'M CRYING
DONT TELL ME NOT TO LIE WHEN I'M NOT LYING

YOU SAY I'M SUCH A FUNNY PERSON
NOTHING I SAY COULD EVER BE HURTFUL

I'M NO FAILIURE I'M JUST DIFFERENT
I SEE THE WORLD BUT CAN'T LIVE IN IT

SO COMPLICATED, YET SO CLEAR
SO FAR AWAY,BUT IT'S RIGHT HERE

I JUST WANT TO BE SEEN FOR WHO I AM
I'M NOT TRYING TO BLIND YOU THIS IS NO SCAM

WHY DON'T YOU BELIEVE ANYTHING THAT I SAY?
HOW CAN YOU SIMPLY LOOK THE OTHER WAY?

TODAY IS THE LAST TIME I SMILE FOR YOU
LITTLE MISS NOT SO PERFECT IS JUDGING YOU.

I feel like I lost you before you were mine
we never even had our moment in time
your life kept on running while I stopped for air
when I got back up you were no longer there

It was already over before it began
it was so much better when I blindly ran
hiding in ignorance, denying the truth
disguising my errors in innocent youth

I can no longer stand it I'm drowning you see
drowning in truth that are smothering me
I thought when I knew this then I would understand
but now I'm so lost because you dropped my hand

I knew love was beautifull I though I would be free
but then all these feelings got trapped inside me
I then ran for cover but cover was gone
and all that was left were the words to this song

This song is of sorrow this song is of pain
this song is of our love that went down the drain
this song is of sorrow this song is of pain
this song is of a love that should have been

It was already over before it began
it was so much better when I blindly ran
hiding in ignorance, denying the truth
disguising my errors in innocent youth.

what do you think of this one???